tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5507673653895812509.post6918056690339319036..comments2024-03-27T09:33:37.646+01:00Comments on Omnium: Two simple poemsSean Jeatinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08978285783271305489noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5507673653895812509.post-39816427942976206102008-03-23T21:56:00.000+01:002008-03-23T21:56:00.000+01:00Janice,I'd like to agree, but I am not sure.Double...Janice,<BR/>I'd like to agree, but I am not sure.<BR/><BR/>Double thanks for your last five words! :) <BR/><BR/>The second poem is 'too strange'.<BR/>Nothing against being strange, but sometimes/often/mostly it's much better to be succinct, i.e. to cut 'it' short.<BR/><BR/>Ardent,<BR/>Thank you very much, indeed.<BR/><BR/>When writing them I knew the first was precise, and I hoped the second would be understood.<BR/>But Janice is right - without saying it: The second is ... how to say? ... too strange.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, I'd be a bloody liar if I said your kind words were no balsam for my heart. :)Sean Jeatinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08978285783271305489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5507673653895812509.post-46712607383147243832008-03-21T22:07:00.000+01:002008-03-21T22:07:00.000+01:00Sean, they are very moving poems.They are deep, pr...Sean, they are very moving poems.<BR/><BR/>They are deep, precise and clear … they will never to be published in any Murdoch printed media.<BR/><BR/>:(Ardenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07691309037378080709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5507673653895812509.post-78689157683458793812008-03-21T03:44:00.000+01:002008-03-21T03:44:00.000+01:00I'm really hoping the old adage 'Night is darkest ...I'm really hoping the old adage 'Night is darkest just before dawn' is the case here with American politics - it sure can't get much darker.<BR/><BR/>The first poem hits deep.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.com